Guiding Light

She felt disoriented as she noticed prolonged black spots in her vision. It didn’t make sense to her. It was a beautiful, pleasant day. The sun revealed a vibrant blue sky. The grass was imbued with deep shades of green. Brilliant red poppies scattered across the field. Birds chirped while perched on the branches of nearby oak trees.

Certainly, that was not normal! A visit to the doctor led to the diagnosis of diabetic retinopathy. She wasn’t sure how long it would be before she became fully blind.

For how can I be sure I shall see again the world on the first of May?” Her initial dismay grew into determination as her intuition and inner vision became her guiding light. She drew strength and inspiration from her friends and the many biographies she previously read of notable individuals who were blind.

British Artist, Keith Salmon

Sa, here! Upon learning more about prosery on dverse, I realized it wasn’t a poem. Still, my first draft came out as a poem. So I thought I’d share. πŸ™‚

Vision slowly disintegrating
Black spots stealing my view
Stumbling in the dark

Anguish. Loss. Grief.

For how can I be sure I shall see again
the world on the first of May?

Acceptance. Adapt. Hope.

Inner guiding light
Heightened awareness
Illuminating the path ahead

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  1. Sadje says:

    Very moving and touching poem/posery Sa

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    1. theresaly520 says:

      Thanks Sadje! A lot was on my mind and heart when I wrote it. πŸ™‚

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome! I can imagine

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  2. I was touched by this , beautiful writings πŸ’œπŸ˜Š

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    1. theresaly520 says:

      Thank you so much! I’m glad it’s touched you as much as the prompts touched me. πŸ™‚ ❀

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  3. michnavs says:

    this is very beautiful…. i am happy to see you join this prompt.

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    1. theresaly520 says:

      Thanks Michelle! I was inspired by your post and everyone else’s. Wanted to participate! πŸ™‚

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      1. michnavs says:

        Yay, so happy to have inspired you…❀

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  4. I so loved it Sa! 😊 πŸ’–

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    1. theresaly520 says:

      Thanks Jenna! I was inspired by your podcast last night. πŸ™‚ Couldn’t help but write about one’s inner sunshine and intuition.

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      1. Awww I’m so glad you were inspired! 😁 ❀️

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  5. Eugenia says:

    A beautifully written and touching piece, Sa! Thank you so much for joining in.

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    1. theresaly520 says:

      Thank YOU for a lovely prompt! I enjoyed writing to it. πŸ™‚ ❀

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  6. InspireChief says:

    Very moving. I enjoyed your writing. You have a beautiful gift. Scott

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