#Poetic Short Story- Grand Performance

Dawn,
a single light
in the empty sky,
agreed that it was
Mother Nature’s
cue to flourish.

Her sultry figure illuminated
once Dawn’s sun rays rose above
the curtain of shadows
in the forest that lies beyond
the horizon.

In the spotlight,
Mother Nature bloomed as she gave
the finest performance of her life
charming her lovely floral audience
that is basking in her ravishing presence.

Her singsong voice
echoes throughout the fields
that seem to stretch
for miles and miles.

“When your nights are cold
and filled with misery,
look inside your heart.”

“Realize that I’m here
to give you my sympathy
and my love belongs to you.”

37 Comments Add yours

    1. theresaly520 says:

      Thank you Kat! Inspiration struck at the strangest time, but I guess spontaneity can be refreshing!πŸ˜„

      1. katkinx says:

        Very much so! That’s how I get some of my best writings😊

  1. iScriblr says:

    Absolutely beautiful!❀

    1. theresaly520 says:

      Thanks Richa! This poem popped up in my brain as I was studying. It was like a pesky neighbor. Had to get it out of my head before I resumed! πŸ˜…β˜Ίβ€

      1. iScriblr says:

        Hahaha.. I’m glad you did for us to read! πŸ˜‰

    1. theresaly520 says:

      Thank you for stopping by! Helene picked such a lovely photo to write about didn’t she? πŸ™‚

      1. Sadje says:

        Yes, it’s an amazing picture.

  2. I love your use of the word sultry here!😁 Truly inspired poem!❀️

    1. theresaly520 says:

      Thank you! This picture was awe inspiring and beautiful. I really wanted to write a story about it! πŸ™‚

      1. You did a wonderful job!😊 πŸ’–

  3. I love the beginning of your poem. Nicely structured and the image you used compliments it beautifully.
    It would be great if you went over to GirlieOnTheEdge and linked up your story so the others participating in the hop can read your work πŸ™‚

    1. theresaly520 says:

      Thank you for the feedback! Yes, I enjoyed the thought of Dawn cutting to the action scene. I’ll be sure to stop by and create a link to add to the pingback. πŸ™‚

  4. V.J. Knutson says:

    I like the idea that she gives her best performance, as if even Mother Nature is just a player in life’s drama. Beautiful poem.

    1. theresaly520 says:

      Thank you, VJ! Her pose seemed dramatic to me which inspired me all the same.

  5. Jules says:

    How patient Mother Nature is for all that seek her…
    Nicely done πŸ™‚

    1. theresaly520 says:

      Yes after reading all the other poems on Helen’s site on humanity’s treatment of her, she will continue to nurture us. Thank you!❀

  6. The Eclectic Contrarian says:

    Nicely done!

    1. theresaly520 says:

      Thank you! I was very inspired that afternoon!πŸ™‚

  7. This is sooooo beautiful. Loved it absolutely. Thank you! πŸ™‚

    1. theresaly520 says:

      Thank you very much! It is one of my favorites! Beautiful photo that I wanted to write a story for! πŸ™‚ ❀

      1. You did a fantastic job. πŸ™‚

  8. myplace3187 says:

    You created such a wonderful poem that brought back a time when I was involved with a green house at live-in residential place. Yes Mother Nature helped us create such stunning wonders with next to no experience. memories brought back with your words. Thank you so much !!

    1. theresaly520 says:

      πŸ™‚ I’m glad I helped bring back wonderful memories! I really enjoyed writing this short beautiful poem!

      1. myplace3187 says:

        I can tell you enjoyed creating this short poem which brought back those wonderful memories. How I wish I could go back one more time !!

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    1. theresaly520 says:

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