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#Contrapunctual Poem – What Do You Want?

Confidence… thrives on honesty, on honor, on the sacredness of obligations, on faithful protection and on unselfish performance. Without them it cannot live.” – Franklin Delano Roosevelt

A Penny
Mementos of Honest Abe
Show me what it is like to live with
Loyalty to your ideals
To earn the respect and esteem

Your Thoughts
Remind me that honesty is the best policy
Stability in the midst of instability
Helps gain the confidence
Of those you are in close relations with

A Penny for Your Thoughts
Mementos of Honest Abe
remind me that honesty is the best policy
Show me what it is like to live
with stability in the midst of instability
Loyalty to your ideals
helps gain the confidence
to earn the respect and esteem
of those you are in close relations with

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In response to:

  • OctPoWriMo2018: Day 19- What do you want?
  • Daily Word Prompt: Bizarre, Enchanted
  • FOWC with Fandango: Public
  • YouTube: “A Few Good Men” – Jack Nicholson – You can’t handle the truth!
  • YouTube: J.S. Bach: Invention No.8
  • Note: “Contrapuntal music is composed of multiple melodies that are relatively independent that are sounded together. Contrapuntal poems are poems that intertwine two (or more) separate poems into a single composition–often by offering one line of poem A and before a corresponding line in poem B from start to finish.” – Writer’s Digest
  • Reflection: I first learned about contrapunctual music when I had to memorize Bach’s Invention No.8 for a piano lesson. I was enchanted by the concept of taking two separate independent melodies and combining them into one song. It was very fun to practice. So when I learned that there is contrapunctual poetry, I wanted to take a stab at it!My boyfriend frequently asks me, “A penny for your thoughts?” when he realizes I haven’t spoken up yet whether he’s chatting about some new, bizarre animated series I haven’t seen yet or a cool invention Elon Musk created. I quietly listen taking in account of everything that’s being said, and sometimes I forget to share my thoughts on the matter. There are days when I think he can read my mind, but alas, that is not the case!

    I’ll be honest… it’s rough for me to be honest at times! I get worried about hurting feelings and how it might affect someone especially if they are sensitive. However, I find that when I do, I may feel uncomfortable at first, but I later feel better for airing out how I truly feel. Those close to me will appreciate and respect my thoughts even if it initially stings a bit. Makes me wonder how “the truth will set you free” even if it’s painful. The truth can be a hard pill to swallow sometimes and it can be overwhelming.

    I think Lincoln’s honesty played a significant part in “binding up the nation’s wounds” even though the public didn’t always like what he had to say at times. The things he said and did radically shifted the tide for future generations. So, in response to Jack Nicholson’s famous line, “You can’t handle the truth!”, Lincoln did say that “Truth is generally the best vindication against slander.” in a letter to the Secretary of War Edwin Stanton July 18, 1864 and “If [people] were given the truth, they can be depended on to meet any national crisis”

    Touché Abe!

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37 thoughts on “#Contrapunctual Poem – What Do You Want?

  1. Honesty can indeed be a difficult pill to swallow. I’ve often struggled with both sides of the coin, so to speak. I’ve been learning that my sensitivity and natural empathetic personality are actually strengths that help put me in the other persons place, whether it’s beings the one faced with speaking up about a problem or I’m on the record end. It helps me understand the complexities of the whole thing and I’m learning it’s a wonderful opportunity for growth. So at least if I’m the one speaking up I can try to present my words in a gentle and caring way that I would want someone to speak to me. Likewise, I’m learning to not become defensive end take things so personally and so much to heart, but instead I’ve been working on allowing these things to expand my perspective of the world around me. Granted that’s not to say I won’t cry, as my heart is truly tender, but I will definitely take it less personally after a good cry to release the tension.😉

    1. Oh yes! Empathy is a very powerful quality! I think if we integrate it within our lives, so much can change for the better! I think it helps develop deep relationships and helps people feel as if they are listened to and understood. It makes people feel less lonely. It must be interesting for you when you have one opinion, but your empathy allows you to understand where the other is coming from. As always, thank you for sharing your thoughtful input on this important matter! I think it also helps me communicate my own thoughts to those near me and any others who may be reading. ❤ 🙂

    1. Thank you Richa! It’s something people have told me, “A penny for your thoughts”. That’s what my loved ones wanted because I am so quiet! It was a different approach than how I thought the poem was going to be., but very meaningful. ❤ 🙂

  2. Great work!

    Abe lived in far different times! 😉

    I have more to say on topic but am rushed. 😦

    A thought to consider. “There is such a thing as too much honesty”

    1. Thanks! I can’t imagine what Abe would say now with everything in politics today. But, yes, there are certain situations where honesty might not be what is called for. For some reason I’m thinking of the movie “Liar, Liar”. 😀

      1. 🙂 Not to sy that we should ever be dishonest of course, just that human social contact up to now has not ever been able to operate all that well with full and total honesty…. not that all that many ever try it of course… even with themself! 😉
        Enjoy your day Sa. 🙂

          1. Not that i have watched an episode – just 4 million adverts – but i imagine The Good Doctor would demonstrate similar issues as House on the point. 😉

            Always a pleasure Sa. 🙂

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